Friday, October 25, 2013

10-35-13

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  The Lights Went Out

By: Jane Montgomery

It was a warm summer day my family was at pasquales restraint and it started to rain a light rain and the rain got harder and harder and the power went out and they tried fixing it and it went on but a few minutes later it went out again they tried again it went on then it went out a few minutes later again they tried again but it stayed out and we were just getting ready or they to go. When we got home the lights wouldn’t turn on. We were going crazy! It turned into a pigsty of disappointment.  Dad got out candles and lit them. Mom got down the flash lights and lantern from the cabinet.  It was dark and cold. Without heat. I was so cold I got a blanket. And I was only a little warmer. I wouldn’t go to the bathroom without a flashlight or the lantern which is ridicules. I was scared with out light so I didn’t want to go sleep that night.I lay in bed waiting to go to sleep.

Thursday, October 24, 2013

10-24-13 

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10-23-13

  The Lights Went Out

By: Jane Montgomery

It was a warm summer day my family was at pasquales restraint and it started to rain a light rain and the rain got harder and harder and the power went out and they tried fixing it and it went on but a few minutes later it went out again they tried again it went on then it went out a few minutes later again they tried again but it stayed out and we were just getting ready or they to go. When we got home the lights wouldn’t turn on. We were going crazy! It turned into a pigsty of disappointment.  Dad got out candles and lit them. Mom got down the flash lights and lantern from the cabinet.  It was dark and cold. Without heat. I was so cold I got a blanket. And I was only a little warmer. I wouldn’t go to the bathroom without a flashlight or the lantern which is ridicules. I was scared with out light so I didn’t want to go sleep that night. In the morning I tried to turn on a light but the light wouldn’t turn on then I remembered about last night.

 

The Lights Went Out

It was a cold spring day my family was at Pesqawallis restraint and it started to rain a light rain and the rain got harder and harder and the power went out and they tried fixing it and it went on but a few minutes later it went out again they tried again it went on then it went out a few minutes later again they tried again but it stayed out and we were just getting ready or they to go. When we got home the lights wouldn’t turn on. We were going crazy! It turned into a pigsty of disappointment.  Dad got out candles and lit them. Mom got down the flash lights and lantern from the cabinet.  It was dark and cold. Without heat. I was so cold I got a blanket. And I was only a little warmer. I wouldn’t go to the bathroom without a flashlight or the lantern which is ridicules. I was scared with out light so I didn’t want to go sleep that night.

Tuesday, October 22, 2013

the lights went out



10-23-13

The Lights Went Out

It was a warm summer day my family was at Pesqawallis restraint and it started to rain a light rain and the rain got harder and harder and the power went out and they tried fixing it and it went on but a few minutes later it went out again they tried again it went on then it went out a few minutes later again they tried again but it stayed out and we were just getting ready or they to go. When we got home the lights wouldn’t turn on. We were going crazy! It turned into a pigsty of disappointment.  Dad got out candles and lit them. Mom got down the flash lights and lantern from the cabinet.  It was dark and cold. Without heat. I was so cold I got a blanket. And I was only a little warmer. I wouldn’t go to the bathroom without a flashlight or the lantern which is ridicules. I was scared with out light so I didn’t want to go sleep that night. In the morning I tried to turn on a light but the light wouldn’t turn on then I remembered about last night.

Thursday, October 17, 2013

Joey Nowak qusions and anwers

Q1.‍What is the most important message you heard from Joey Nowak during our video call? A1.How he became a base ball writer. Q2.why didnt Joey Nowak play baseball?

Monday, October 7, 2013

jane a monty

Jane

one of my favoret t.v shows is Myth Busters, they blow up things and do rely weird stuff its crazy awesome! One of my favoret games is mine craft(building trying to survive). I like pogo sticking I can hi five someone while pogo sticking with no hands.
It was one cold morning  we were getting ready to go to Boston Massachusetts . I was just getting up and every one else were eating breakfastand I was getting dressed I couldn't wate. This will be so much fun! I thought. I count wate throgh the car ride.